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Last day of school by the feet from slipping on the stairs, her lips trembling Hot, fresh air outside the class together, along with photos taken hugs, tears, signing yearbooks and saying goodbye one last time beautiful long hair blonde green eyes, white cat super hot clothes in the magazine motor bus from the first day of next year, full of parking our cars face twisting mouth open and moving our cars to another post I closed the door, then open your mouth now range long hair no more hair cuts made rumor grows friend boys drastic changes as they are to leave my crush me as the last day of school. And look how the first day with the shorter hair. Do you have opinion or suggestions on this? Be honest please! What else could I use lines?? Thanks! This is a poem in free verse. No rhyme!
I loved not only the last part And oh what poems have to rhyme duh if you English?
Sugarland – County line [[with lyrics]]
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